The West Wing (Dance Version) - A Review; Performer's Ethics?

Also note that all views are personal and even if I did not enjoy it, there are many members of the audience who did.
Watched The West Wing (Dance Version), presented by NUS Theatre Studies, just this afternoon with Shen Chin.
The below review might be offensive for those who are involved in the production of the play.
Please note that everything here is only my view. If it is clear that I am missing out an important part of Chinese Opera, or where I went wrong, please do tell me and I will edit the post accordingly and with pleasure.
It was a 3-hour play but surprisingly did not feel like 3 hours. That was not to say it was fantastic. There is going to be quite a long section on the bad things about my experience so I'll start on something good first.
I thought it was a difficult play to present. There were good actors in there who portrayed their roles very nicely and I felt my friend did his role very well. All of them dared to act, which was great! Even to the point of sex positions in the bedroom scene, they did it quite fluidly. Characters who were supposed to be funny in nature were funny. Scenes that were supposed to be funny made us laugh.
The translation from Chinese to English was nicely done. There were no loose ends or words which did not fit in. Except for the "bitch" word used. I also loved the way the lyrics improvised fit into the English songs nicely.
The actors either remembered all of their lines or when they forgot they improvised very quickly such that we can't tell. I loved that there were no gaps in delivery of lines. When characters were supposed to speak in unison, they did so without hesitation. Most delivery of the lines were nice.
I loved that they had subtitles for the songs, although they kind of distracted me from watching the actors dance.
The live band was good!
Alright, time for the bad stuff.
I think I have set my standards too high for this play. In fact, I have erroneously set it in the league of professional plays, forgetting that those involved are students from a Theatre Studies module, some of whom has had no prior experience to acting. The cause? The high standard of advertising done, with full-length banners and posters. (While reading, please keep in view the mindset I brought with me into the theatre. It is crucial to remember this because I got quite crude towards the end).
Now I better understand when my friend, Eng Wen, told me very simply in reply to my question if it was going to be good, that it is a play put up by students in a module. The teacher-cum-director of this might have set his sights too high despite the fact that he might have wanted the students to have a feeling of how it is like, staging a full play with a real audience.
Frankly, I walked out of the theatre utterly disappointed and feeling like I have wasted a huge portion of my money on it. Nevertheless, I am glad I now have an idea of what this controversial play is about. If the play the students presented was as close to the original, I now understand why it was banned in three dynasties. Politically, religion-wise and sexually, it breached sensitive grounds in a most daring way. I suspect if it were staged in modern day's context, it would have been controversial as well, for the issues of politics, religion and sex are still sensitive areas, though a lot lesser. However, the play is most refreshing and I would have liked to read or watch the original text. Imagine a monk who is money-minded and married, or a very suggestive sex scene. Thinking back now, I half-wished this English version, the first of its kind in Asia, had been done by professionals instead.
I asked Shen Chin how he found the first 18 scenes, during the intermission. He had been actively involved in theatre directing plays before so I wanted to hear from him, get a second viewpoint. He said he felt it was a flashy play with no substance with the sole purpose of entertaining. The original play is actually a romance story. I frankly do not know how the original play is like, so I cannot judge if that is the actual intonation. After the entire play has ended, Shen Chin said he felt the play was not very seriously done. I put it across more cruelly - very amateurish and messy. The amateurish part I can still take but the messy acting part I really cannot. Sadly, being messy is the result of being an amateur.
Several things which bugged me as a member of the audience:
1) Hardly any use of props.
A member of the production has told me that in Chinese Opera, there is no use of props, unlike in Western Theatre. Sorry!
2) Number of tape markings on stage. From where I was sitting, the number of bright yellow tape on stage, marking the positions of the few props they had to move around every scene, was supremely distracting. It looked like nobody has swept the stage clean and just made the already messy presentation very, very messy.
3) Moving around of props while transiting scenes. Backstage crew made a lot of noise while moving props around, banging and dragging. The good thing, however, is that they did not talk on stage.
4) I can't stand the dancing. It's just a matter of me being anal. I feel dancing has to be done by people who really know how to dance in order to bring across that lyrical feel. Nevertheless, it was a brave attempt.
5) Getting off-stage after curtain call was disorganized.
If my friend had not been in it, I would have felt like the full $14.50 was an utter waste. I hope the normal version is better.
Ironically though, the play is kind of addictive after one repeatedly thinks about it.
After watching this, I realized something about the performing arts. When we charge a certain price for a ticket to be held at a certain place, we give people certain expectations. Performers have to ensure that the audience feels the ticket is well paid for. Sadly, this is not always the goal of all performers.
We want to have a track record of n number of shows a year (think annual concerts), but the quality of shows is equally, if not more, important. I've always thought from the viewpoint of a performer - not being nervous, just get it over and done with, get people to come support us. But have we, as performers, ever thought about the audience and making sure they feel their time and money are well spent, that they have enjoyed themselves? Is that not the ultimate aim of a performer? Is a performer not also an entertainer?
Ultimately it boils down to one very basic thing we have always talked about - Getting what you paid for.
In response to criticisms about this review
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7 Comments:
i feel that what you've said was a too crude and blunt. They are all students, just like yourself. How can you pay peanuts and expect high quality casts and props? N by harping on the fact that you've not seen the real version and this version is amatuerish, isn't it weird? Coz from the way you describe, I would have thought that you've seen the original version and you're a pro at play directing. Sadly you're not. So shouldn't you encourage your fellow schoolmate and praise them more than criticising them? I feel that it's a funny play which i've enjoyed immensely, and it's so worth the price. And i've paid full $19!!! Oh and for information, i've heard that to book the place cost $2000. How much do u think your $14.50 has contributed to the cost?
From your critique of the play, I sincerely hope that you know what exactly you were talking about.
You sounded like a pro in play-directing or acting or in backstage and I really hope that you are really adept in one of those. If not, I absolutely could not understand where you were coming from and might not even be in the position to criticise harshly on a school production.
If you were there to watch the play and support your friend, you would have known how much effort was put into producing the play. By putting the play down like that, I seriously do not think that you are really sincerely or willingly supporting your friend.
Everyone will have different take towards performing arts but it does not mean that you could demean the efforts of others. You just have to adjust your mindset to the situation and not judge them on the level of professional standards. If they were to possess professional standards, I am sure that they would not need the support of unwilling audience like yourself at the play.
hi..
i was personally involved in this production and there are certain things which i have to pen down now or burst. you and your friend are probably unaware about things related to asian theatre, much less chinese opera.
1. in chinese opera, there is the use of minimal props and sets.. such that the full effect of costumes and make up can be brought out.
2. this production was done within the span of 2 & 1/2 months of hard work, by students taking the module, about half of whom are not TS majors.
3. they have burnt their evenings AND weekends to learn OPERA movements from teachers from the Singapore Opera Institute, who have mentioned that chinese opera performers usually take more than 10 years to perfect their moves. Again, the need to learn chinese opera movements stems from the fact that BECAUSE there is minimal props in CO, the performers NEED TO pretend that teacups and other props like joss sticks are there. It is not western theatre.
It's ironic that you think you've wasted your money when you've already stated in the earlier portion of your entry that the actors DARE to act, and the script was good such that the content and delivery of lines by the actors flowed well.
If i may add, it will not be the last time you hear about our version of The West Wing.
It's true that the role of a performer is to entertain, but it's also true that there are just people who cannot appreciate.. and amongst which are those who think they know more than they actually do.
SO you and your friend can just take your criticisms and shove it up your sorry asses. Because to comment without knowing shit about what chinese opera is like, is just so ridiculous it's incredible.
and because you dont have the guts to put your name online, i dont see why i must.
Hello anonymous-es and Jie Qi! Oh no! Argh! I thought I have already toned down the review so that it isn't so harsh!
In any case, thank you for commenting and telling me how you all felt so that I can further explain myself and for showing me where I was wrong. Hope you all actually come back here to read my reply!
First and foremost, I'd like you to please re-read the entry, and notice that I am speaking as a member of the audience. I am not involved in theatre, though I am in music, and I am aware it might have led to my inability to appreciate this particular play. And I admit, and am sorry, if I have interpreted certain sections of the play wrongly.
anonymous 1 (12.16am): Actually when I first bought the tickets, I frankly wasn't thinking of my friend in it. Evil, right?
Like I've said (and please DO remember this), I erroneously thought that the standard of the play would be that of professional, regardless of who was the cast. I thought really really really highly of them. Plus the standard of advertising was done really well - professionally and must have cost a lot of money! So although my friend said it was a student production, I did not quite put it in my mind. You HAVE to understand where I'm coming from to see my point! I hope you do!
I have also previously attended other plays/concerts/whatever in UCC and the standard was kinda good, so I simply brought my expectations along.
About praising my schoolmates... I did tell my friend I think he did very well (which I really thought he did) but I dunno the rest of them leh...
About the price of tickets paid. Why are you telling me the price of ticket paid? I'm really glad that you enjoyed the play! Actually I've heard a few people who have enjoyed the Dance version too. I think you watched the normal version though, so I don't know how different they are (dance and normal).
As for the price of the hall. I don't know what to say. If my audience were so nice that they'd think of paying for the ticket to pay for the price of renting concert hall for our concerts, I would have loved them to bits!
And speaking from a performer's point of view, I'd think every ticket counts. I appreciate every person who come to our concerts, regardless of the price they paid, whether they can afford it or not. It is an enjoyment to play for them.
I hope this clears up things a little, if you come back to read.
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Jieqi: Out of all the comments, yours hurt me the most. Because it has struck in me something very true. I wish I had went there with the mindset of supporting my friends, but I did not and I feel guilty for it. I went there because I thought it sounded interesting. Like I've said above, I quote,
"I erroneously thought that the standard of the play would be that of professional, regardless of who was the cast. I thought really really really highly of them. Plus the standard of advertising was done really well - professionally and must have cost a lot of money! So although my friend said it was a student production, I did not quite put it in my mind. You HAVE to understand where I'm coming from to see my point! I hope you do!"
I am not in production of plays. But is my entry really so harsh? I think it might have been because of the fresh feelings of disappointment that made me write all those. But please re-read the entry and see that I come from the viewpoint of an audience. If I have relayed otherwise, I apologize for it.
Yes, I do not know how much effort they have put into it. Thank you for telling me that. That is one thing I have failed to take into account and appreciate that you have pointed it out to me. I WOULD NOT demean their efforts though!
anonymous 2 (2.07):
About telling me those facts about Chinese Opera and the reason behind the absence of props. I really did not know that (as you have inferred. heh.) Ok, that was an error on my part. Appreciate that you told me.
Actually the last 2 paragraphs weren't pointing to you all. It was a thought that came to me and meant all performing arts in general.
Actually, I was very glad that you had pointed out certain characteristics of Chinese Opera which I did not know and was about to thank you for it, until you became very rude and said to shove our comments up our sorry asses.
Even if we did not understand it, it would have been nice if you could have explained it to us. I would have accepted the criticisms, edited my post and acknowledge that I was wrong. Now, I am going to edit my post anyway because I do not want others to have a bad impression of TS students from my post if it is really not fact, but your own words have shown others just how some NUS students are.
And my name is littered all over my blog lor! I am not personally bothered if you do not leave a name because I know some people prefer anonymity. Whichever you prefer.
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